Feedback on my draft

Edit the text below for clarity and flow while keeping my voice. Rules: keep my word choices where they work, cut filler, break up long sentences, fix grammar, don't add new ideas or corporate phrasing. Then list the 5 most important changes you made and why.

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Edit the text below for clarity and flow while keeping my voice. Rules: keep my word choices where they work, cut filler, break up long sentences, fix grammar, don't add new ideas or corporate phrasing. Then list the 5 most important changes you made and why. Text: {{text}}

Turn these notes into a blog post for {{audience}}.

Notes:
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Requirements: a specific, non-clickbait title; a hook that states the problem in the first 2 sentences; short sections with descriptive subheadings; concrete examples; a clear takeaway. Length ~{{word_count}} words. Don't invent statistics, quotes or anecdotes — mark [NEED EXAMPLE] where one would help.

Turn these notes into a blog post for {{audience}}. Notes: {{notes}} Requirements: a specific, non-clickbait title; a hook that states the problem in the first 2 sentences; short sections with descriptive subheadings; concrete examples; a clear takeaway. Length ~{{word_count}} words. Don't invent statistics, quotes or anecdotes — mark [NEED EXAMPLE] where one would help.

Write a cold email to {{recipient_role}} at {{company}}.

What I offer: {{offer}}
Why them specifically: {{personalisation}}
Ask: {{call_to_action}}

Rules: under 120 words, subject line under 6 words, one clear ask, no flattery or buzzwords, plain text. Give 2 variants with different angles.

Write a cold email to {{recipient_role}} at {{company}}. What I offer: {{offer}} Why them specifically: {{personalisation}} Ask: {{call_to_action}} Rules: under 120 words, subject line under 6 words, one clear ask, no flattery or buzzwords, plain text. Give 2 variants with different angles.